影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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 Posted: 2013-04-14 19:39:00 Post subject: 古绝•田园 |
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古绝•田园
曾经种梦以为家，毒草出没渐无花。
灵台荒芜几人问，寂寞如铁锈似沙。
古绝•读书岁月
青灯唯我事，难得寸心知。
文章出海内，纸上众生痴。
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桃园郎
童生
Joined: 06 Mar 2013
Posts: 53
Location: 中国四川省大英县
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| Posted: 2013-04-14 21:22:34 Post subject: |
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灵台荒芜几人问，寂寞如铁锈似沙。
转结甚妙。
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2013-04-15 08:41:46 Post subject: |
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心田可似海，青灯岁月长。问好寒水兄！
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2013-04-15 20:29:55 Post subject: |
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心田如梦海，纸上笔耕忙。
问好！ |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2013-04-16 00:16:09 Post subject: |
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| 尤喜《古绝•田园》，婉约！耐读。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2013-04-16 12:40:24 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位临读。
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