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惊蛰
伍培阳
童生


Joined: 28 Feb 2013
Posts: 26
Location: 公务员
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PostPosted: 2013-04-11 21:36:26    Post subject: 惊蛰 Reply with quote

惊 蛰
  
  
  
  卸掉阴影的缠绕
  昂扬的草叶
  绘画阳光的色彩
  鹅黄,浅绿,碧莹
  
  听见声音在泥土内部拱动
  觅食的母鸡诧异
  脚抓震颤,怵麻
  根须宛若白色的闪电
  裸呈三月
  舒放,辽阔,邈远
  
  村庄在农历里抬头
  发现厚密的云层
  蕴藏燃烧的火焰





耳朵
  
  
  
  风竖起耳朵
  一树树嫩叶,在倾听里
  拉近鸟声,推远鸟声
  
  看见虫蛹纷纷翻身
  杏花开了,桃花开了
  油菜花亦开了
  大地精心缝制缤纷的嫁衣
  好像正在等候试穿
  妩媚,妖娆,美丽
  
  蝴蝶的身段
  玲珑,和谐;多姿,飘逸
  
  
  
   抵 达
  
  
  
  几案上的玻璃杯
  此刻静谧
  茶叶舒展,蜷曲;髙雅,琐细
  感觉侵袭的凉意
  渐渐沉到黄昏黯淡的光线
  
  园内的桃花似乎忧郁
  蜜蜂含蜜走了
  蝴蝶不知所措
  今夜的月色会停泊某瓣芳心么
  
  日历翻动手指
  今天惊蛰
  他从躺椅上悠然蹦起
  好像看见闪电挟带雷鸣
  穿越弥漫的暮色
  抵达春天的内心




写 生
  
  
  时光扑闪翅膀
  风的剪影
  蝴蝶轻巧,栖落盛放的李花
  三月的呼吸
  荡漾,起伏;纯美,响亮
  
  山脚的瓦屋,门敞开着
  阳光的涂料
  均匀,温暖;敦厚,丰富
  
  村姑坐在坪的中央
  写生的画笔,此刻
  好像倍感
  淋漓,生动,幸福
  
  
  
   夜 读
  
  
  
  迈开楷书行书隶书的脚步
  文字翻开闲情逸致
  呼吸句子,段落,章节
  
  与美眉相遇
  谈论择偶,时尙,口红,首饰
  与翩翩青年同行
  言及升学,就业,打拼,跳槽
  抑或混迹中年的队伍
  批阅人情世故,人间冷暖
  淡定,通透,宁靜,致远
  
  突然,一缕陈旧的月光挤入窗户
  夜色摇曳
  靠墙的杏花踩动风声
  远山朦胧,岀走的道路
  还能适时追回来吗
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2013-04-11 22:51:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象,贴近生活
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拈花汉
童生


Joined: 07 Apr 2013
Posts: 89
Location: 中国甘肃
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PostPosted: 2013-04-12 14:44:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

细节突出内心 手法别致
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拈文字之花,抒汉子之情!拈生活之花,流心底之意!
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