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PostPosted: 2013-04-11 06:30:39    Post subject: 半生缘 Reply with quote

半生缘
越过山隈隩,秋来百叶黄。
青葱成记忆,岁月剩苍茫。
幸得清风伴,方能笑语扬。
而今多少梦,宛在水中央。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-11 09:12:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

清风相伴好。就怕pm2.5。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-12 10:25:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

越过山隈隩,秋来百叶黄。
青葱成记忆,岁月剩苍茫。
幸得清风伴,方能笑语扬。
而今多少梦,宛在水中央。

韵律中规中矩。诗喻人生路途坎坷,幸好还有清风相伴,回首不堪,多少风发意气,如水中捞月。人生不如意事常八九!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-13 19:23:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好各位老师,感谢提读!
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