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五律•风铃

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2013-04-12 18:39:35 Post subject: 五律•风铃

五律•风铃落日每风斜，思君解语花。临窗看徙燕，隔槛痛飞沙。听似门铃喜，摇疑脚步赊。叮当云梦里，牵挂遍天涯。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-04-13 04:48:41 Post subject:

风铃情远，牵挂天涯。好一首借物抒情的咏物诗! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-04-13 07:16:25 Post subject:

不错的一首咏物抒情诗。学习。

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2013-04-13 18:41:54 Post subject:

谢谢两位评读哦问好 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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