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人的心与狗的尿
谭剑飞
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Joined: 15 Mar 2013
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Location: 中国广东
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PostPosted: 2013-04-03 23:37:23    Post subject: 人的心与狗的尿 Reply with quote

心咚咚咚的在敲打着我,
声音格外的清晰。
然而我躺在床上,
合着眼睛,
一脸平静。
远处的狗,“汪汪汪......”
此起彼伏。
抗议着夜的降临。
汽车鸣叫声,
机器切割声......
根据以往经验,
狗,汽车,机器,
心,和夜......
都会在凌晨里变得宁静。
然而屋子里的清除掉了的黄色狗尿,
依然残留着阵阵的挥之不去的骚气。
我无法确定,
人的心与狗的尿有着怎样的关系。
我无法控制。
我躺在床上,
合着眼睛,
一脸平静。
心咚咚咚的在敲打着我,
声音格外的清晰。

2013.04.03
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山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Location: 中国贵州
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:07:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

合着眼睛,
一脸平静。
心咚咚咚的在敲打着我,
声音格外的清晰。

哈哈!!——表面平静,内心不平静!
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谭剑飞
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Joined: 15 Mar 2013
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PostPosted: 2013-04-06 12:01:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
合着眼睛,
...
Smile “人的心与狗的尿有着怎样的关系。”这个没解决,平静不了啊..
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一无
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Joined: 20 Mar 2013
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PostPosted: 2013-04-07 09:14:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

“我无法确定,
人的心与狗的尿有着怎样的关系。 ”
有时候,大概是等于的关系。在路边可以看到的。那叫“狗主人”。
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谭剑飞
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PostPosted: 2013-04-07 11:11:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

一无 wrote:
“我无法确定,
...
/shake hands
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