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母亲

绿玉
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Posted: 2013-04-04 06:37:54 Post subject: 母亲

天下母亲都美　我的母亲是最美　　因为只有　　我母亲的血液　　能孕育我的生命

山城子
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Posted: 2013-04-04 16:34:32 Post subject:

因为只有　　我母亲的血液　　能孕育我的生命 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-04-04 19:14:41 Post subject:

個人覺得此詩可以再深入畢竟創作要帶讀者進入那情境問好

绿玉
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Posted: 2013-04-04 21:37:54 Post subject:

戀海 wrote:

個人覺得
此詩可以再深入
畢竟創作要帶讀者進入那情境

問好

谢谢指导与问好，很抱歉，我这是文字也不是诗，也就带不了读者钻进那意境花瓶里去。

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Posted: 2013-04-04 21:45:04 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

因为只有
　　
我母亲的血液
　　
能孕育我的生命

是呀，

因为只有
　　
我母亲的血液
　　
能孕育我的生命。这就是我母亲，最美之处。

呵呵，我这写的是文字，老师可不要当诗读哦。

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