戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
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Posted: 2011-02-01 00:08:30 Post subject: 海邊 |
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這一片
悠悠孤寂是我無心擠出來的
中間雖有點曖昧
風乾的時候
仍然可以提供另一種讀法
不是清瘦,卻起豐騷
我就如此被關在
輕柔的波水
生活很重
這裡卻輕得可以任意掏空
而我也只賸下一個觀念
圖畫裡的簡單一筆
當眼睛釋出了黃昏
可以邊走邊盪
聽著海浪
敲打三節拍 |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
戀海Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-15 15:08:48 Post subject: |
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金金 wrote: |
恋海,你对海的依恋真不是一般的深。是完全的!
春天快乐!! |
問好金金
喜歡海
是從小時候的作文的事了
忽然間
都已經過了四十年 |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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东北诗弦 童生

Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 73
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Posted: 2012-11-20 13:00:20 Post subject: |
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生活很重
這裡卻輕得可以任意掏空 _________________ 但觉高歌有鬼神,焉知饿死填沟壑? |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-20 13:23:17 Post subject: |
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问好! |
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青洋 秀才

Joined: 25 Sep 2012 Posts: 342 Location: 溫哥華 青洋Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-23 07:09:59 Post subject: |
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我就如此被關在
輕柔的波水
問好! _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影 |
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戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
戀海Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-07 21:43:31 Post subject: |
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問好樓上回應的詩友
尤其是東北詩弦
謝謝你對我詩作的喜愛 |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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张洁 童生
Joined: 22 Feb 2013 Posts: 13
张洁Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-09 14:51:35 Post subject: |
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邊走邊盪
聽著海浪
敲打三節拍
喜欢。 |
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戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
戀海Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-09 21:30:38 Post subject: |
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問好張洁與杯中沖浪
謝謝你們的回應
戀海 |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
戀海Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-11 13:03:45 Post subject: |
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問好一无
謝謝回應
有時
心緒繁瑣
到了海邊
就洗滌了憂愁 |
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戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
戀海Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-14 06:57:38 Post subject: |
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問好一无
謝謝感性回應 |
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