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白喜一场
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 20:19:30    Post subject: 白喜一场 Reply with quote

黑夜过后又是黎明

蝙蝠只好又钻进了壁缝

刚才天空乌云滚滚

阳光又射破了云层

风满怀欣喜卷起迎雨的浪花

雨却化成了一片彩云
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2013-04-02 07:46:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

三个情节表现一个意思。
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绿玉
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PostPosted: 2013-04-02 21:17:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
三个情节表现一个意思。

不会吧,这三个情节多过六个以上的意思,还有诗歌高度的跌浮,大概你没有读出来。
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