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虚构（3首）

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-25 21:40:40 Post subject: 虚构（3首）

虚构（3首）文/雪蛟《下雪了》其实你落在哪儿都一样白得干净白得彻骨白得江山失重白得衣袍辽阔一夜间，让整个世界都变了颜色而那只躲在房檐下的乌鸦偶然尖叫一两声还是黑的《虚构》请允许，我以一枝梅的鲜红想象你的白而孤冷如铁，已悄然入骨不知从何时起，我对季节嬗变已不再敏感，时光的刀片轻取万物却无法穿透内心的苍凉朔风凛凛，几乎剥光了所有的叶子而枝条硬朗，还在频频挥动手臂向骤然降临的严寒致意一次卑微的绽放，或抵达必得背负一场劫阻吗枝头暗香浮动，温暖鹅毛般飘过《鹰雕》羽毛早已飞走了。谁见过超越死亡的翱翔只留下虚构的肉身和无法雕琢的痛比蓝天更生动的草原一次又一次向群鸟示爱衣食无忧的牛羊沿途洒下白云的歌声人们各怀秘密纷纷躲进生活的内部，分享俗世的欢愉和爱。而你的沉默比石头还坚硬

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-25 22:31:14 Post subject:

学习——不错的一组，拟推荐。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-25 22:34:14 Post subject:

请告诉哪里人。比如我：中国贵州 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-26 21:04:38 Post subject: 问好！

山城子 wrote:

学习——不错的一组，拟推荐。

谢谢山城子兄。中国河北

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-27 14:37:27 Post subject:

好的——已经做了推荐，备选。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

博弈
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Posted: 2013-03-28 01:48:47 Post subject:

时光的刀片轻取万物 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-28 06:34:59 Post subject:

有功底。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

水弦
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Posted: 2013-03-28 09:42:28 Post subject:

不错的一组 _________________ 诗意生存

金金
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Posted: 2013-03-28 15:22:06 Post subject:

冷静，可以用力更收敛一些 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-30 20:44:28 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

好的——已经做了推荐，备选。

握手，遥祝春安~

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-30 20:45:15 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

时光的刀片轻取万物

问好！

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-30 20:45:59 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

有功底。

谢谢冲浪斑斑~

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-30 20:46:59 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

不错的一组

水弦好，感谢~

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-30 20:47:48 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

冷静，可以用力更收敛一些

春安！

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