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雪蛟
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 21:40:40    Post subject: 虚构(3首) Reply with quote

虚构(3首)

文/雪蛟

《下雪了》

其实
你落在哪儿都一样
白得干净
白得彻骨
白得江山失重
白得衣袍辽阔
一夜间,让整个世界都变了颜色
而那只躲在房檐下的乌鸦
偶然尖叫一两声
还是黑的

《虚构》

请允许,我以一枝梅的鲜红
想象你的白
而孤冷如铁,已悄然入骨

不知从何时起,我对季节嬗变
已不再敏感,时光的刀片轻取万物
却无法穿透内心的苍凉

朔风凛凛,几乎剥光了所有的叶子
而枝条硬朗,还在频频挥动手臂
向骤然降临的严寒致意

一次卑微的绽放,或抵达
必得背负一场劫阻吗
枝头暗香浮动,温暖鹅毛般飘过

《鹰雕》

羽毛早已飞走了。谁见过
超越死亡的翱翔
只留下虚构的肉身和无法雕琢的

比蓝天更生动的草原
一次又一次向群鸟示爱
衣食无忧的牛羊
沿途洒下白云的歌声
人们各怀秘密
纷纷躲进生活的内部,分享俗世的
欢愉和爱。而你的沉默
比石头还

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山城子
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 22:31:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习——不错的一组,拟推荐。
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 22:34:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

请告诉哪里人。比如我:中国 贵州
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PostPosted: 2013-03-26 21:04:38    Post subject: 问好! Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
学习——不错的一组,拟推荐。

谢谢山城子兄。中国 河北
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PostPosted: 2013-03-27 14:37:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

好的——已经做了推荐,备选。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 01:48:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

时光的刀片轻取万物
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 06:34:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

有功底。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 09:42:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的一组
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 15:22:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷静,可以用力更收敛一些
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 20:44:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
好的——已经做了推荐,备选。

握手,遥祝春安~
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 20:45:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
时光的刀片轻取万物

问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 20:45:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
有功底。

谢谢冲浪斑斑~
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 20:46:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

水弦 wrote:
不错的一组

水弦好,感谢~
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 20:47:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
冷静,可以用力更收敛一些

春安!
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