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攀爬者
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 11:35:02    Post subject: 攀爬者 Reply with quote

攀爬者

(一个初二学生,在春天到来之前,结束了自己年仅12岁的生命。
据悉,他和老师在办公室谈话,期间说要上厕所,在厕所里留下遗书,便从五楼跳了下去。)

有一方奇异的静
不许有风,因为有风便会有浪
那里也有阶梯
窄窄的,孤零零的
伸入云端,一片奇异的灰色的云

你像千千万万攀爬者一样
困在水泄不透的阶梯里
用尽浑身解数
高一点
再高一点
耳畔,是进军的号子
背后,是高悬的教鞭
汗水,心血
缓缓渗出清瘦的躯壳
青紫色的大口
奋力争夺那点愈来愈稀薄的空气
尖厉的呐喊
穿不透厚厚的围墙
打不破沉积千年的寂静
绝望
刻在脸上,穿过一双双色盲的眼睛
漫延

朦胧中,你看到外面的天
好蓝好蓝
那一双搏击的翅膀是那样的自由
那里一定有新鲜空气
残存的一点精力
脱缰
跃出高高的囚梯,你飞了
一双搏击的翅膀
在那一方寂静中,溅起
朵朵殷红
随即
便了无痕迹

寂静如初
攀爬依然
伴着号子 和扬起的鞭
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 13:24:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

很残酷
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 17:18:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

许多生命在在这个荣盛时代都被娇惯了
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PostPosted: 2013-03-26 13:03:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
很残酷


谢谢hepingdao。问候!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-26 13:03:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

远狼 wrote:
许多生命在在这个荣盛时代都被娇惯了


多谢远狼点评。 问候。
看到 “狼”,想起《狼图腾》。。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-29 12:56:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

失败的教育让人痛心
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PostPosted: 2013-03-29 21:06:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
失败的教育让人痛心

同感。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-29 21:41:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水和风动的点评。 问好长周末!
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