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前进吧
谭剑飞
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PostPosted: 2013-03-29 19:54:40    Post subject: 前进吧 Reply with quote

前进吧
`谭剑飞`

雨真的是太大的了。
手提着雨伞的人,
也躲到了墙脚。
漆黑的一条线。

看着这漫天的淫雨,
白白的雨线,
像板块凝成一片。
我还有什么理由不平静。

唉,土地,
耕犁了一半。
人,消失了。
光秃秃着,春天来了。

小小的雨伞下,
拥挤着两个人,
什么行速,什么的雨,
却也没人在乎。

呵,
张开的雨伞,
总比收起来的好看。
即使是黑色。

2013.03.29
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2013-03-31 13:31:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵,
张开的雨伞,
总比收起来的好看。
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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谭剑飞
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PostPosted: 2013-03-31 14:58:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
呵,
张开的雨伞,
总比收起来的好看。
Smile
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一无
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 09:54:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。
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名心退尽道心生,如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足,好诗不过近人情。

———清 张问陶



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谭剑飞
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 09:57:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

一无 wrote:
欣赏。
远抱 Smile
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远狼
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 14:39:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

一场携爱旅行的美丽
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诗书短文章,潦草乃为狂。
管他载道否,吾趣吾自张。
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谭剑飞
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 18:37:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

远狼 wrote:
一场携爱旅行的美丽
Smile 你看到了爱情。还有一个隐喻,这个“旅程”,无比艰辛。
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