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【幻想】

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Posted: 2013-03-10 23:55:31 Post subject: 【幻想】

【幻想】 “彩色的云朵赶快回家吧！” 到太阳的胸膛到月亮的眼眶天空中，猎人已经开始追杀屠戮的步伐必将到达天涯在你的白天与我的夜晚里太阳强迫月亮为妻猎人手无贺礼独自坐在海角哭泣狂躁的海也静下来听他倾诉心事而风却想到了起源的目的于是有生命死亡，有种子发芽于是你问我要去哪里于是我回答 ——手砌砖瓦，于是我回答 ——从坟墓里扯一把祖先的头发回家 2013.3.11 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-03-11 00:36:15 Post subject:

彩色的云朵赶快回家吧！ _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2013-03-11 00:39:39 Post subject:

于是我回答 ——手砌砖瓦，于是我回答 ——从坟墓里扯一把祖先的头发回家诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。好！相得益彰，诗人有时就得有点狂傲

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Posted: 2013-03-11 06:31:28 Post subject:

魔幻现实主义来啦！春天好！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2013-03-19 10:10:06 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

彩色的云朵赶快回家吧！

当时有一些奇怪的想法，接着就一下冒出这么一句话
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Posted: 2013-03-19 10:17:37 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

于是我回答
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这一些杂乱景象不忍舍弃，便录成文字直接呈现出来。这也是用标题《幻想的》缘故。本来也考虑用《神秘故事》，但想到诗人海子有这样的题目文章，也就作罢了
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Posted: 2013-03-19 10:19:32 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

魔幻现实主义来啦！春天好！

快哉，我也时髦一回！道模友，春天好！
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Posted: 2013-03-19 17:48:15 Post subject:

从坟墓里扯一把祖先的头发回家 _________________ 爱情不是钟摆。

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Posted: 2013-03-21 13:25:07 Post subject:

吴端择 wrote:

从坟墓里扯一把祖先的头发回家

问好端择，盼多提意见!
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Posted: 2013-03-21 17:43:50 Post subject:

开始和结束都很吸引人，特别是后一句，有一种张狂美，给人问天下，舍我其谁的气概，令人不由叫绝。问好：朋友。 _________________ 情绪是我说话的唯一方式

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Posted: 2013-03-21 21:35:27 Post subject:

幻想能够这样表达出来必须拥有诗一样的心灵。

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Posted: 2013-03-22 23:43:34 Post subject:

四毛 wrote:

开始和结束都很吸引人，特别是后一句，有一种张狂美，给人问天下，舍我其谁的气概，令人不由叫绝。问好：朋友。

这两句确是神来之巧。我唯喜张狂之美，但并无舍我其谁的气概！
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Posted: 2013-03-22 23:45:39 Post subject:

YGHXS wrote:

幻想能够这样表达出来必须拥有诗一样的心灵。

是的，是有诗一样的内心——有这种体验！
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Posted: 2013-03-23 09:37:43 Post subject:

欣赏。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-03-23 14:39:08 Post subject:

问好！

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Posted: 2013-03-26 17:00:07 Post subject:

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欣赏。

诗友好！
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Posted: 2013-03-26 17:00:44 Post subject:

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问好！

雨，远握！
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