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城市之夜

小飞龙
童生

Joined: 25 Mar 2013
Posts: 8
Location: 中国浙江温州
小飞龙Collection

Posted: 2013-03-25 00:55:46 Post subject: 城市之夜

夜很深月亮哑了街灯开始一盏一盏叫了起来汽车在匆匆忙忙地行走人们像一群群蚂蚁从窝里爬出来它们不停地搬运着霓虹和音乐搬运着啤酒和爱情搬运着名和利这场喧闹与我无关我静静地坐在桌边沉默成一本被遗忘的书 _________________ 以诗词会友。

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模Collection

Posted: 2013-03-26 07:33:16 Post subject:

你还是在搬运情思和词句啊。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

山城子
榜眼

Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2013-03-27 13:54:39 Post subject:

得——用于动词谓语之后，补语之前的结构助词。地——用于状语与动词谓语之间的结构助词。你文本中的“得”，应当用“地”。的——用于定语与主语或宾语之间的结构助词。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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