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雪域之花(外二首)
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PostPosted: 2007-04-05 05:05:44    Post subject: 雪域之花(外二首) Reply with quote

雪域之花(外二首)

圣洁的灵魂啊,在雪域之巅绽放
有多少过往人在土地走失
卑鄙或者圣洁让光芒裁判

我看到二千多年前的一个诗人
还在光中行走
而他的影子衍生的后代
在忙忙碌碌中发出他们的呼喊
却又在忙忙碌碌渐渐归于湮灭

宇宙之大,归于渺小的个人
我磅礴的诗句,止于你
千万年不曾沉寂的一个颤抖音符

没有声音的语言

群星璀灿,蛙声再一遍叫醒圣洁土地的灵魂
可是醒来的灵魂,却以工业文明的名誉枪毙蛙声

青蛙无法与他们沟通
可是承载万物的大地
疯狂报复愚蠢的头颅
让他们说出自己的龌龊
让他们说出自己的罪恶
说出他们一生自欺欺人

升华我们这渺小的一生

狭隘的爱开放着无果之花
慈祥的爱繁衍后代
机械反复的吵架无休无止
人格和人性一次又一次深度分裂

但是,只要听到他们的声音
或是看到他们的身影
也或是仅仅感觉到他们存在
幸福的暖流融化了一切

孩子,在你们的身上
我看到了爱无私的回报
看到了幸福突破爱狭隘的樊蓠
升华我们这渺小的一生
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PostPosted: 2007-04-05 19:31:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

更喜欢第一首
帮你把标题加黑了, 这样醒目些. 你觉的可以吗? 若不喜欢就告知, 我会帮你改回去.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-06 07:56:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
更喜欢第一首
帮你把标题加黑了, 这样醒目些. 你觉的可以吗? 若不喜欢就告知, 我会帮你改回去.
谢谢,喜欢.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-06 08:28:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
更喜欢第一首
帮你把标题加黑了, 这样醒目些. 你觉的可以吗? 若不喜欢就告知, 我会帮你改回去.

同感. 对人生很深刻的反思. 喜欢.

BTW,我怎么看不出来"标题加黑"了. 是我眼睛的毛病还是计算机屏幕的问题. Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2007-04-06 20:28:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

他乡客 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
更喜欢第一首
帮你把标题加黑了, 这样醒目些. 你觉的可以吗? 若不喜欢就告知, 我会帮你改回去.

同感. 对人生很深刻的反思. 喜欢.

BTW,我怎么看不出来"标题加黑"了. 是我眼睛的毛病还是计算机屏幕的问题. Crying or Very sad
谢谢.
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