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七绝 湖景
春绿夏红秋叶灿,迎来冬日素装颜。
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絮伴风笛入画栏
问好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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谢谢岛主雅赏! |
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一绝四景,凝练之作。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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结句传神!诚如黄老师点评。 |
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秋叶 秀才
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意境很美,欣赏  |
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结句点睛妙不可言。学习啦! |
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谢谢莹雪MM雅赏!互相学习。 |
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湖月临窗的宁静 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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娓娓湖景入画栏! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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谢谢并问好白云老师! |
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