埃德蒙一 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2013 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2013-03-16 19:09:53 Post subject: 无题两首(六言绝句) |
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无题一
两盏孤灯对月,
一堵篱笆围墙。
若识君郎才俊,
何来万里篇章。
无题二
微风细数落叶,
乡径紧随夕阳。
心之所向何处,
夜来一抹秋霜。 _________________ 不要问我,在表达什么。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-16 20:01:24 Post subject: |
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欢迎新朋友! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-16 23:32:32 Post subject: |
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情景相融,情随景生。欢迎新朋友! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-17 06:52:15 Post subject: |
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欢迎! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-17 07:42:42 Post subject: |
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个人觉得第二首更为含蓄优雅。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-17 21:13:04 Post subject: |
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欢迎新朋友,等你的有题  |
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埃德蒙一 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2013 Posts: 15
埃德蒙一Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-18 08:44:40 Post subject: |
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谢谢哦。 _________________ 不要问我,在表达什么。 |
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埃德蒙一 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2013 Posts: 15
埃德蒙一Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-18 08:45:22 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
欢迎新朋友,等你的有题  |
好,呵呵。 _________________ 不要问我,在表达什么。 |
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埃德蒙一 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2013 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2013-03-18 08:45:49 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
情景相融,情随景生。欢迎新朋友! |
谢谢。 _________________ 不要问我,在表达什么。 |
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埃德蒙一 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2013 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2013-03-18 08:46:38 Post subject: |
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谢啦。 _________________ 不要问我,在表达什么。 |
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埃德蒙一 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2013 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2013-03-18 08:47:11 Post subject: |
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嗯,是啊。 _________________ 不要问我,在表达什么。 |
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