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《遭遇工伤》
钱晓强
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 23:24:49    Post subject: 《遭遇工伤》 Reply with quote

《遭遇工伤》
1993年4月24日10时许,一根火热的铁削刺伤我的右眼,天突然黑了。此后数年,我深陷工伤争议诉讼,真正体会了什么是黑暗的公正。
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透过玻璃的阳光
照在机床上。忘我的
丝丝入扣的操作
那铮亮的柱体旋转
飞奔出严厉的铁削

火热滚烫,也蜚流短长
一不小心,便把我送给
带轮的飞奔,送给
额上的伤痕
辨认我失散的家人
在风吹
还有谁叫我:倒霉

我的雁阵撤退了
我的浪漫被摧毁
再一挣扎
跌进生活的污水

陛下啊!您仍需努力
使高雅的隐士变浑
使官场变黑
左右都是狩猎的人
一排排扇着翅膀的军队


93.5.3日写于铜川矿务局医院眼科。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 23:44:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

透过玻璃的阳光
照在机床上。忘我的
丝丝入扣的操作
那铮亮的柱体旋转

开端很好

后面,感觉没能让文字飞旋起来
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 08:12:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

同情遭遇。现在可以学习张海迪,生命仍然可以精彩!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 10:52:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

苦难让人更清楚的审视世事,10年过去了,愿你有一个幸福的现在和将来
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PostPosted: 2013-03-14 00:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
苦难让人更清楚的审视世事,10年过去了,愿你有一个幸福的现在和将来


苦难让我坠落,但多了脚踏实地的感觉。谢谢关心!
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