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五绝 佛缘
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 22:39:33    Post subject: 五绝 佛缘 Reply with quote

五绝 佛缘

红尘幻亦真,佛渡有缘人。
沧海虽无岸,雾深见彩云。

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红尘幻亦真,佛渡有缘人。
沧海虽无岸,雾深藏彩云。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 23:24:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

雾深见彩云
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 23:49:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

是啊,生活中也有美好的一面。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 00:32:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏心存佛,佛渡有缘人。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 00:46:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
庆宏心存佛,佛渡有缘人。


谢谢黄老师雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 19:48:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏兄这首佛缘很有哲理。沧海虽无岸,雾深见彩云。激赏!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 20:19:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
庆宏兄这首佛缘很有哲理。沧海虽无岸,雾深见彩云。激赏!


谢谢笑聊兄雅赏!问好笑聊兄!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-11 08:52:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

蓮船到彼岸,佛渡有缘人。問好庆宏!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-11 09:55:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
蓮船到彼岸,佛渡有缘人。問好庆宏!


问好白云老师!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-11 11:51:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

菩提树下坐,佛缘净红尘
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PostPosted: 2013-03-11 21:47:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏兄改一“藏”字,全诗顿觉灵动。可见诗是改出来的。学习。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 05:23:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
菩提树下坐,佛缘净红尘


白水兄有佛缘!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 05:25:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
庆宏兄改一“藏”字,全诗顿觉灵动。可见诗是改出来的。学习。


谢谢笑聊兄欣赏!“见”改为“藏”也是为了避“孤平”。
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