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玉人歌•春雪有感

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-01 18:03:28 Post subject: 玉人歌•春雪有感

玉人歌·春雪有感中国辽宁·朝阳莹雪飞寒絮，又是笛轻歌，逍遥频顾。巧书文笔，岁末且留趣。回眸往日童真气，只把兰章叙。自宁神、闲伴幽思，扑窗乱舞。思百态千束，感香淡随和，蕊娇半吐。信步寻来，静月与梅素。萦怀飘袖冬将过，不肯轻轻去。却殷勤、故作春风暖雨。

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Posted: 2013-03-01 20:52:56 Post subject:

情中景，景中情；一唱三叹！

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Posted: 2013-03-02 11:20:54 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

情中景，景中情；一唱三叹！

谢谢笑卿兄点评！问好

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Posted: 2013-03-03 01:37:37 Post subject:

回眸往日童真气，只把兰章叙。

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-03 08:05:14 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

回眸往日童真气，只把兰章叙。

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Posted: 2013-03-03 11:11:16 Post subject:

回眸往日童真气，只把兰章叙。既自谦，又怀远。

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Posted: 2013-03-03 12:06:13 Post subject:

可以出一本吟诗雪集了：）

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Posted: 2013-03-03 14:35:49 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

回眸往日童真气，只把兰章叙。

既自谦，又怀远。

谢谢qinghongGG点评，qinghongGG过誉啦！

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Posted: 2013-03-03 14:37:57 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

可以出一本吟诗雪集了：）

呵呵，今年却有此种打算。还有待落实哦！

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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:12:16 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

玉人歌·春雪有感
中国辽宁·朝阳莹雪
飞寒絮，又是笛轻歌，逍遥频顾。
...

佳作，仄声韵表达了意境。

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-04 13:54:24 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

玉人歌·春雪有感
中国辽宁·朝阳莹雪
飞寒絮，又是笛轻歌，逍遥频顾。
...

佳作，仄声韵表达了意境。

谢谢点评！问好！

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Posted: 2013-03-11 08:40:21 Post subject:

巧书文笔、兰章宁神，情景交融！問好莹雪！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-03-11 13:47:50 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

巧书文笔、兰章宁神，情景交融！問好莹雪！

謝謝關注與點評！問好白雲君！

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