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竹笋

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Posted: 2013-03-08 06:40:18 Post subject: 竹笋

黑暗埋不了你的志向泥土封不住你的追求因为你在地下积蓄了一身锐气锐气是不抑制锋利的箭头哪怕泥土把你埋地最深最厚终久都会被你层层穿透

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Posted: 2013-03-08 06:42:44 Post subject:

锐利 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-08 10:02:29 Post subject:

那么泥土把你埋地最深最厚 ——“那么”，应当是“哪怕”吧？ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-03-09 11:14:43 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

那么泥土把你埋地最深最厚

——“那么”，应当是“哪怕”吧？

谢谢李老师指导，问好！

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Posted: 2013-03-09 11:16:55 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

锐利

老师每一次鼓励，都是绿玉的动力，谢谢！

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