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桃花
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 11:56:15    Post subject: 桃花 Reply with quote

朵朵红星缀绿枝,清香四溢惹人痴。
时随蝶舞旋飞雪,纵使飘零也入诗。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 20:15:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

点点繁星缀绿枝,清香四溢惹人痴。
时随蝶舞旋飞雪,纵使飘零也入诗。

雪,与桃花的颜色不相匹配。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 07:03:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一句已经点出颜色,第三句是写出其雪的飘逸,
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