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格律诗:我为诗醉7首
一卷飘零
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 10:39:34    Post subject: 格律诗:我为诗醉7首 Reply with quote

格律诗:我为诗醉7首


1.五律.寻诗

久居无好句,乱语不成篇。取道荒郊外,听风颖水边。

晴空飞鹤处,诗意到云颠。豪气存高远,从师效自然。

2. 七律.写诗

题目关乎真感受,谋篇立意巧灵工。

前人用韵依平水,吾辈读音更普通。

造句简明毋晦涩,遣词确切忌虚空。

弄清格律莫拘泥,继往开来诗界风。

注:普通,指以普通话为读音依据、以《新华字典》为注音依据的中华新韵。

3. 五律.润诗

偶成深意句,润色付书笺。低唱音伤美,长吟词欠鲜。

搜肠重复改,入座再三编。务要穷心境,翻身难就眠。

4. 五律.品诗

浩浩我中华,诗词孕大家。经书吟泰斗,网络秀奇葩。

忧恨生浑泪,闲愁付酽茶。悲人悲忿事,乐亦共听花。

5. 五律.书博友论诗

人间降众仙,电脑赛诗篇。一首网中叹,全书天下传。

随心吟岁月,着意立文联。赋就先唐句,吾侪继古贤。

注:开设博客(http://blog.sina.com.cn/honglouyunyu),建立旧体诗圈子(http://q.blog.sina.com.cn/jiutishi),论诗交友,遂有此作。

6.七绝.说音韵

故纸堆中翻旧韵,诗词学写做文人。

今声朗诵当成拗,古板遵循何为因。

7. 七绝.与某君论诗文兼人品二首并附篇



格律沿承几百年,韵音改变又新天。

宽严守废争千载,各有名篇万古传。



偏要推敲炼美文,更须修养做谦君。

纵然满腹经纶句,口秽形惭愧万分。

附篇:



经年造就成格律,累世沿承更韵音。

守费宽严争百代,名篇各自拢人心。



诗文偏爱推敲美,人品还须塑造纯。

纵有经纶华丽句,行惭口秽愧其身。

 注:尝与《诗词吾爱》(www.52shici.com)网站某论诗跟帖下附和,不意招致某君谩骂,虽善意规劝,仍不思悔改,却变本加厉。想诗文人品,理应双修,乃有此作。“又新天”指推广普通话,颁《中华新韵》。



通联:河南省平顶山市鲁山县委组织部 翟红本

电话:13569581972;0375——5067008

身份证号码:410423197208040031

邮编:467300

邮箱:zhhb190@126.com

博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/honglouyunyu



作者简介:

翟红本,男,汉族,1972年出生,河南省鲁山县人。已有多篇古典诗词在《诗词月刊》、《中国诗词月刊》、《诗词世界》、《诗词百家》、《中国诗赋》、《长白山诗词》、《诗词通》、《甘肃诗词》、《中华楹联报》、《平顶山日报》、《玉林日报》、《尧神》、诗集《醒着的海水》等刊物发表或在征诗征联比赛中获奖。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 11:07:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友!诗友对诗颇有心得。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 19:21:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友!
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