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Posted: 2007-04-03 21:39:49 Post subject: 黎明

黎明公鸡的唇印擦亮天空的乳名夜晚在刀锋上溃退一群叩击心扉的风是黑铁内部的清泉乌鸦被一块石头击中旗帜里的音符逐渐泛红雪地上的花朵长满一匹马划过的痕迹在这波光摇曳的黎明我的每一个枝头都有火山喷发因为我深入泥土的根系有一个响亮的名字：人民 2007年4月4日黎明 _________________ 走下去，圣殿就在前方！

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-04-03 22:04:58 Post subject:

都是很独特的意象同时出现, 缺乏内在的必然的线 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

金金
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Posted: 2007-04-04 01:00:55 Post subject:

语言锋利，句子单一。问好：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

寒丁
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Joined: 16 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-04 02:54:36 Post subject:

意象不错，问好 _________________ 冷是另一种暖

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