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稻禾晒田的时候

xctianbin
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Posted: 2007-04-04 16:04:04 Post subject: 稻禾晒田的时候

稻禾晒田的时候田斌稻禾晒田的时候只剩下乡亲们薅草的脚窝里残留下的小汪汪的水残留下的游不走的小鱼和泥鳅放学后的暮色里几个调皮快乐的少年放下书包挽起裤腿把小手伸进小汪汪的水捉游不走的小鱼和泥鳅用细细的枝条把一条条小鱼和泥鳅穿成一串串长长的快乐哼着听不清的小曲被袅袅的炊烟领回家门不知是该哭还是该笑三十多年前的记忆现在已无处找寻邮编：242000 通联：皖宣城市宣州区文化馆电话：（0563）2025012 E-mail: xctianbin@163.com

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Posted: 2007-04-04 18:13:28 Post subject:

稻禾晒田的时候,牵动回忆.

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Posted: 2007-04-04 22:38:51 Post subject:

缺少诗意。。。。。。。直白了些。

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