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七绝 赏春
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 23:14:30    Post subject: 七绝 赏春 Reply with quote

七绝 赏春

新诗古韵竞芬芳,色彩斑斓百卉香。
若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 23:24:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有胸襟
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PostPosted: 2013-03-08 23:50:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
很有胸襟


谢谢岛主雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 00:29:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

胸有春光,春光永驻。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 00:47:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
胸有春光,春光永驻。


问好黄老师!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 09:21:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

心中有春春常在
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 10:50:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。好结!寄意深刻,
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 11:55:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
心中有春春常在


正是。心中有春之人方能赏百花之美。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 11:55:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄磊 wrote:
若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。好结!寄意深刻,


谢谢诗友雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 20:11:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝 赏春

新诗古韵竞芬芳,色彩斑斓百花香。
若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。

临屏依韵敬和一首:

融融绿色映花芳
酿蜜蝶蜂辛苦忙
一阵风来摇柳显
无端惹出好阳光
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PostPosted: 2013-03-09 20:18:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
七绝 赏春
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谢谢笑聊兄和诗!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-13 05:29:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

“百花香”中“花”字出律,改为“百卉香”。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-13 07:11:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗友诚心来赏景,清茶淡饭有春光。

Laughing
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PostPosted: 2013-03-13 09:29:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

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诗友诚心来赏景,清茶淡饭有春光。

Laughing


秋叶兄诗艺厨艺皆精.
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