qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-08 23:14:30 Post subject: 七绝 赏春 |
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七绝 赏春
新诗古韵竞芬芳,色彩斑斓百卉香。
若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2013-03-08 23:24:14 Post subject: |
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很有胸襟 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-08 23:50:32 Post subject: |
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谢谢岛主雅赏! |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-09 00:29:16 Post subject: |
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胸有春光,春光永驻。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-09 00:47:10 Post subject: |
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问好黄老师! |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-09 09:21:21 Post subject: |
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心中有春春常在 |
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黄磊 童生
Joined: 02 Mar 2013 Posts: 31 Location: 中国 安徽 黄磊Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-09 10:50:54 Post subject: |
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若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。好结!寄意深刻, |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-09 11:55:07 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
心中有春春常在 |
正是。心中有春之人方能赏百花之美。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-09 11:55:44 Post subject: |
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黄磊 wrote: |
若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。好结!寄意深刻, |
谢谢诗友雅赏! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-09 20:11:24 Post subject: |
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七绝 赏春
新诗古韵竞芬芳,色彩斑斓百花香。
若是诚心来赏景,胸需开阔有春光。
临屏依韵敬和一首:
融融绿色映花芳
酿蜜蝶蜂辛苦忙
一阵风来摇柳显
无端惹出好阳光 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-09 20:18:18 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄和诗! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-13 05:29:16 Post subject: |
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“百花香”中“花”字出律,改为“百卉香”。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-03-13 07:11:56 Post subject: |
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诗友诚心来赏景,清茶淡饭有春光。
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-03-13 09:29:46 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
诗友诚心来赏景,清茶淡饭有春光。
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秋叶兄诗艺厨艺皆精. |
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