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折红英－抒怀

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-03 16:39:50 Post subject: 折红英－抒怀

狂风作，飞砂落，重云顷刻晴空没。闲情坐，新诗和，忧心难夺，怎知无惑？默，默，默。韶华过，时消磨，欲书成败不说破。依窗阁，文思薄，觅章寻问，虑句当合。酌，酌，酌。

白水
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Posted: 2007-04-03 19:49:17 Post subject:

很不错的一首. 东风恶，MM, 建议这句不要, 太多人太熟悉的名句, 反到影响你的词本身的美. 己见, 不妥见谅.

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-04 00:32:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

很不错的一首.
东风恶，MM, 建议这句不要, 太多人太熟悉的名句, 反到影响你的词本身的美.
己见, 不妥见谅. Embarassed

好的。谢谢GG

我这就改。

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