莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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 Posted: 2013-02-05 10:07:26 Post subject: 玉梅令·梅 |
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盈盈雪曼，润就新娇面。幽幽立，自然闲淡。
有玉梅几树，傲骨雅心舒，吟者颂，暗香浸染。
残冬去后，先绘云霞灿。吟歌诉，影疏巧散。
待到群芳盛，洒脱乐回归，留品质，古今名远。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2013-02-05 11:27:47 Post subject: |
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姣面，闲淡，傲骨，心舒，霞燦，影疏，洒脱----
好一株“古今名远”的玉梅！欣赏！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2013-02-05 14:31:17 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
姣面，闲淡，傲骨，心舒，霞燦，影疏，洒脱----
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谢谢黄老点评。新春快乐！ |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2013-02-06 06:50:27 Post subject: |
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| 玉梅临风暗香来。。。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2013-02-06 09:39:06 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 玉梅临风暗香来。。。 |
谢谢qinghongGG关注！ |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2013-02-06 18:42:02 Post subject: |
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莹雪妹新春好！
咏梅这题用得多了，难见佳作。你的梅词却另有一番景象：立意深远。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2013-02-14 18:31:31 Post subject: |
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笑卿兄新春好！谢谢兄点评赞扬！我继续努力。 |
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