风墙
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《家》
妻子：女儿明天就要回来了
还带着在一起打工的男朋友
男孩出了工伤
一条腿被机器吸走
老伴：深抽一口烟，沉思
屋子里的灯熄了，窗外又飘起了雪花
《悟》
小和尚：师傅
你为啥常在河边打坐念经
老和尚：回经房好好念经去吧
小和尚念经很认真
一天夜晚，无意中
偷吻了木鱼的嘴唇
从此，点亮了河里的星星
河对岸，又多亮起了一盏灯
程义稳 2013.2.9
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| Posted: 2013-02-13 13:43:38 Post subject: |
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空间感好，谢谢分享
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风墙
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| Posted: 2013-02-13 15:26:12 Post subject: |
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谢谢岛主关注！
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2013-02-16 16:40:03 Post subject: |
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有意的语义含蓄或模糊。
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风墙
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| Posted: 2013-02-16 21:03:53 Post subject: |
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谢谢朋友点评！向您学习！请多指导！
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| Posted: 2013-02-16 21:16:18 Post subject: |
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不错的短诗！
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谢谢朋友，请多指导！
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