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脚下的云朵和云海
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PostPosted: 2013-02-14 20:26:20    Post subject: 脚下的云朵和云海 Reply with quote

脚下的云朵和云海

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云朵滑过机翼

思绪淌成云海

山脉在云下散步

汽车在云下跑着蚂蚁

不知云朵下面的人群在干什么

在劳动?在学习?在吵架?在休息?

不知云朵下面的人群在想啥子

想做梦?想打仗?想死亡?想生育?

听见云下的故乡在喊我

不知我飘在云上躲迷藏

时间吐出一朵一朵的梦

吞了我空茫的泪

空间伸出一片一片的手

在翻读我给蓝天的诗集

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2013-2-16下午16:32改


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PostPosted: 2013-02-14 21:55:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

思绪如云,梦想如云,你在蓝天收割彩云,收割小诗。
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PostPosted: 2013-02-15 18:39:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

风墙 wrote:
思绪如云,梦想如云,你在蓝天收割彩云,收割小诗。


谢谢风墙的到访和读感!春天好!
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PostPosted: 2013-02-15 19:38:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

动感心思,筘问天地……
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PostPosted: 2013-02-16 15:06:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

云视众生
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PostPosted: 2013-02-16 16:23:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

庞文龙 wrote:
动感心思,筘问天地……


谢谢庞文龙的到访和读感!春天的问候!
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PostPosted: 2013-02-16 16:38:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

远狼 wrote:
云视众生


谢谢远狼的远看!还云视故乡和自己也。
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PostPosted: 2013-02-16 20:31:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.
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PostPosted: 2013-02-19 10:31:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.


谢谢读赏和鼓励!春天的问候!
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PostPosted: 2013-02-25 14:04:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

大气入云了
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PostPosted: 2013-02-25 15:34:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
大气入云了


身在云中飘。

拜访了金金博客。
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PostPosted: 2013-02-26 18:02:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

时间吐出一朵一朵的梦

吞了我空茫的泪

空间伸出一片一片的手

在翻读我给蓝天的诗集

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PostPosted: 2013-02-26 20:26:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

云天畅想
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PostPosted: 2013-02-27 19:29:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
时间吐出一朵一朵的梦
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谢谢秀才的鼓励!春天春梦!
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