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玉梅令·梅
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-02-05 10:07:26    Post subject: 玉梅令·梅 Reply with quote

盈盈雪曼,润就新娇面。幽幽立,自然闲淡。
有玉梅几树,傲骨雅心舒,吟者颂,暗香浸染。

残冬去后,先绘云霞灿。吟歌诉,影疏巧散。
待到群芳盛,洒脱乐回归,留品质,古今名远。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2013-02-05 11:27:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

姣面,闲淡,傲骨,心舒,霞燦,影疏,洒脱----
好一株“古今名远”的玉梅!欣赏!
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-02-05 14:31:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
姣面,闲淡,傲骨,心舒,霞燦,影疏,洒脱----
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谢谢黄老点评。新春快乐!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2013-02-06 06:50:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

玉梅临风暗香来。。。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-02-06 09:39:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
玉梅临风暗香来。。。

谢谢qinghongGG关注!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2013-02-06 18:42:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪妹新春好!

咏梅这题用得多了,难见佳作。你的梅词却另有一番景象:立意深远。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-02-14 18:31:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
莹雪妹新春好!
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笑卿兄新春好!谢谢兄点评赞扬!我继续努力。
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