莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-05 10:07:26 Post subject: 玉梅令·梅 |
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盈盈雪曼,润就新娇面。幽幽立,自然闲淡。
有玉梅几树,傲骨雅心舒,吟者颂,暗香浸染。
残冬去后,先绘云霞灿。吟歌诉,影疏巧散。
待到群芳盛,洒脱乐回归,留品质,古今名远。 |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-05 11:27:47 Post subject: |
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姣面,闲淡,傲骨,心舒,霞燦,影疏,洒脱----
好一株“古今名远”的玉梅!欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-05 14:31:17 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
姣面,闲淡,傲骨,心舒,霞燦,影疏,洒脱----
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谢谢黄老点评。新春快乐! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-02-06 06:50:27 Post subject: |
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玉梅临风暗香来。。。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-06 09:39:06 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
玉梅临风暗香来。。。 |
谢谢qinghongGG关注! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-06 18:42:02 Post subject: |
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莹雪妹新春好!
咏梅这题用得多了,难见佳作。你的梅词却另有一番景象:立意深远。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-14 18:31:31 Post subject: |
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笑卿兄新春好!谢谢兄点评赞扬!我继续努力。 |
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