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有赠（外两首）
岷江一苇
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PostPosted: 2013-02-07 18:42:56    Post subject: 有赠（外两首） Reply with quote
你走后
窗台那株花
开了
犹如我的寂寞
无处诉说


视角

你倒立身体
从胯下望出去

上帝都被你
踩在脚底


甲壳虫

从卡夫卡笔下爬出来
再一次变形

从城市上空爬过
投下巨大的倒影
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 08:13:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
你倒立身体
从胯下望出去

上帝都被你
踩在脚底

是不是自娱自乐和自我调侃？
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 10:31:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
很形象 Very Happy
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岷江一苇
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 15:06:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
你倒立身体
...

这不是自娱自乐！当然，你可这样理解。
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岷江一苇
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 15:09:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
很形象 Very Happy

谢谢大学士！新年快乐！
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 15:49:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
更喜欢第一首！
——除夕快乐！！
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风动
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 22:32:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
有灵感的亮点，诗尽而余味未尽。新年问好！
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岷江一苇
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 23:03:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
[quote="山城子"]更喜欢第一首！
——除夕快乐！！[/
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谢谢朋友赏读！除夕快乐！
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岷江一苇
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PostPosted: 2013-02-08 23:06:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
风动 wrote:
有灵感的亮点，诗尽而余味未尽。新年问好！

谢谢理解！朋友，新年快乐！
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