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【那一个女孩】

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Posted: 2012-11-07 13:17:37 Post subject: 【那一个女孩】

【那一个女孩】读《北美枫》落尘诗社上城的《办公室的一夜》 ——题记那一个女孩那另一个女孩 “早上好” “早上好”是今晚生命柔软的陪伴今晚，我有疲惫今晚，我有长醉窗前，很高的楼的窗前夜已阑珊星儿也远是美人归是男儿慈怀，是男儿缱绻 “过了今晚” 今晚，相遇不见今晚的心事被夜色包揽那一个女孩那另一个女孩 “早上好” “早上好”是今晚生命柔软的陪伴 2012.11.8 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2012-11-07 22:25:06 Post subject:

问好远狼君，看来在这个论坛找到感觉了，很有新意的一首。喜欢上城是这个论坛的老朋友了，可能登陆不顺，久不见，挺想。

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Posted: 2012-11-08 01:27:20 Post subject:

很温情 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-11-08 02:38:59 Post subject:

問好！ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-11-08 14:51:52 Post subject:

上城看到得喜欢 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2012-11-08 17:41:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好远狼君，看来在这个论坛找到感觉了，很有新意的一首。喜欢
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是的，诗的感觉！
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Posted: 2012-11-08 17:42:54 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

很温情

因为相遇不见的问侯“早上好”
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Posted: 2012-11-08 17:43:53 Post subject:

青洋 wrote:

問好！

青洋好！
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Posted: 2012-11-08 17:47:40 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

上城看到得喜欢

白水君说上城好久未登录了，也许不方便。
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Posted: 2012-11-09 17:10:29 Post subject:

我给他说。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2012-11-12 05:20:26 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

我给他说。

掌门人，你给他说了没？
记得弈当初特赞赏他的诗歌

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Posted: 2012-11-12 17:30:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

金金 wrote:

我给他说。

掌门人，你给他说了没？
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是呀，我借用了文字，还是希望上城允可才是
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Posted: 2013-02-07 11:34:24 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

金金 wrote:

我给他说。

掌门人，你给他说了没？
...

是呀，我借用了文字，还是希望上城允可才是

尽管拿来用，没关系，但有个前提：要用得好才行 Very Happy

狼兄新年快乐。
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Posted: 2013-02-07 11:37:27 Post subject:

借狼兄宝地，趁新年还未过去，一并问好白水，金金，青羊，岛主。早上好！新年好！祝愿北美枫新年新气象！ _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2013-02-10 16:19:58 Post subject:

上城 wrote:

远狼 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

金金 wrote:

我给他说。

掌门人，你给他说了没？
...

是呀，我借用了文字，还是希望上城允可才是

尽管拿来用，没关系，但有个前提：要用得好才行 Very Happy

...

多谢上城君，远狼给你拜年
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