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Posted: 2007-03-07 20:59:11 Post subject: 白玉苦瓜(双语)

白玉苦瓜 --看台北故宫博物馆玉雕什么苦都吃得善烹饪的妻却总把苦瓜我的旧爱排在菜单之外只好透过诗页透过空间阻隔的玻璃让这用时间的文火徐徐煨成的佳肴鲜美诱动舌尖去裸泳津津的记忆 Viewing the Jade Bitter Gourd at the Palace Museum in Taipei Despite their sweet aftertaste my wife refuses to include bitter gourds in her menu Standing in front of the glass case I watch my favorite delicacy simmer in the slow flames of time while the tip of my tongue swims naked in the saliva of memory _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2007-03-07 21:08:44 Post subject:

我也喜食苦瓜 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-03-07 21:13:03 Post subject:

我想这个“苦”字有多义。欣赏这句的英译 " Despite their sweet aftertaste ". 非马先生对两种语言的使用非常娴熟。学习。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-03-07 22:21:56 Post subject:

Despite their sweet aftertaste 什么苦都吃得善烹饪的妻还是英文本来的传神；）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-03-08 17:43:21 Post subject:

学习先生

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Posted: 2007-03-10 18:24:06 Post subject:

“只好透过诗页透过空间阻隔的玻璃 …… 去裸泳津津的记忆” ——绝妙！！学习 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-03-11 09:06:27 Post subject:

Despite their sweet aftertaste my wife refuses to include bitter gourds in her menu 什么苦都吃得善烹饪的妻却总把苦瓜我的旧爱排在菜单之外读非马老师的双语诗, 我常想如果按字面直译很难出此效果. 有时看电影, 两军阵前将军振臂"NOW", 勇士们随之冲锋陷阵......我又想, 如果译者把"NOW"译成'现在", 而不是"冲啊", 一定令人啼笑皆非. 究竟该如何把握这个度, 的确是一门学问. 真希望能听到一些有关方面的理论.

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Posted: 2007-05-06 18:57:49 Post subject:

读先生的佳作 _________________ 中国龙泉剑瓷文化网:http://www.lqjcwh.com/ 我的博客网址： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246181482 http://aaabc888.bokee.com/ 我的创作室网址：http://www.zjlm.net/web/web_article.asp?wid=214

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Posted: 2007-05-06 20:29:10 Post subject:

谢谢诸位的阅评。问大家好！ _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2007-06-26 01:06:36 Post subject:

读了，学习了。由于是短诗，不好展开和深入，比如“凝固的苦”、“艺术的苦”等。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-07-05 11:29:37 Post subject:

学习 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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