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山城子
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PostPosted: 2012-11-16 15:22:25    Post subject: 我们 Reply with quote
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文/ 山城子

从苦难中来
走凸凹走崎岖走坎坷走蒺藜
目标很远，山重水复
像无数小溪
向汹涌澎湃汇集

走过了硝烟
走过了铁血
走过了屈辱和锅里没米
进入一个儿时憧憬之地嬉戏
像进入一个歌吧或网站休息

路途之中
还要沙尘还要刮风还要下雨
一任电闪雷鸣
千年的万里长城依然屹立
护九百六十万的安然与安逸

已经备下了足够的路费
已经备下了畅达的心理
还有坚实的脚力
天天出发
向着和平向着幸福向着美丽

2012-11-17于黔中
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PostPosted: 2012-11-17 10:25:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
已经备下了足够的路费
已经备下了畅达的心理
还有坚实的脚力
天天出发
向着和平向着幸福向着美丽
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PostPosted: 2012-11-18 10:18:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢chen来阅！！
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PostPosted: 2012-11-19 22:33:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
像无数小溪
向汹涌澎湃汇集



既然是潇洒，希望这份潇洒能跳起舞来，句式变化更多！！
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 05:38:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
从你的诗歌看得见你良好的心态，祝万事顺意
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 08:48:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
走过了屈辱和锅里没米
进入一个儿时憧憬之地喜戏

道路是曲折的,前途是光明的
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 10:02:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
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像无数小溪
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谢谢金金！！
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 10:05:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
从你的诗歌看得见你良好的心态，祝万事顺意


问好白水！！
我孙女儿回上海上幼儿园了，我们又恢复两个人的日子，每天都自由自在很惬意的！
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 10:08:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
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走过了屈辱和锅里没米
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哈！那个喜应当是嬉，我改过来了。
谢谢岛主！——是的，事物都是这样的。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 11:28:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
山城子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
从你的诗歌看得见你良好的心态，祝万事顺意


问好白水！！
我孙女儿回上海上幼儿园了，我们又恢复两个人的日子，每天都自由自在很惬意的！

...


人最难得的莫过于好的心态。没有经历过真正的磨难，很难保持超脱，平和，而超脱平和是快乐之源。谢谢老师。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 12:28:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
我们一直向前，沉重地走，轻盈地走，快乐地走，这就是我们的社会和过程。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-21 17:28:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
山城子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
从你的诗歌看得见你良好的心态，祝万事顺意


问好白水！！
我孙女儿回上海上幼儿园了，我们又恢复两个人的日子，每天都自由自在很惬意的！

...


人最难得的莫过于好的心态。没有经历过真正的磨难，很难保持超脱，平和，而超脱平和是快乐之源。谢谢老师。


年轻时，我们太苦了！
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PostPosted: 2012-11-21 17:29:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
子在川上曰 wrote:
我们一直向前，沉重地走，轻盈地走，快乐地走，这就是我们的社会和过程。


问好老朋友！！ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-11-23 07:00:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
走啊走，走啊走，找到一個好朋友。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-23 07:01:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
天天出发
向着和平向着幸福向着美丽

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PostPosted: 2012-12-03 15:22:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
青洋 wrote:
走啊走，走啊走，找到一個好朋友。


敬个礼呀，握握手，你是我的好朋友！！
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PostPosted: 2012-12-03 15:23:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
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天天出发
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诗人的出发


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PostPosted: 2012-12-08 12:47:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
“自在飞花轻似梦”。问好山城老师！ Smile
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PostPosted: 2012-12-08 23:00:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
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“自在飞花轻似梦”。问好山城老师！ Smile


问好风动！！
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PostPosted: 2012-12-13 09:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好！
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