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夜曲
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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 02:57:30    Post subject: 夜曲 Reply with quote
夜曲
91,7

月光照在发上
长发柔情万状

月光照在颈上
肩胛发出银光

脸，对着脸
往返，是无声的回声

眼，粘着眼
一动，就会扯痛视线

轻轻地，嚓──
手，在身体上划燃

照亮身体──
巷口，巷尾，与拐角

你问：今晚
能否晚点走

而我想的是
能否，留下来
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下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 03:14:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
：）拜读/问好
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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 14:11:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
相间时难别也难，从此君王不早朝。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 20:38:16    Post subject: 好 Reply with quote
在没有人的夜晚,没有了月,没有了星,只有诗(你的诗).
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PostPosted: 2007-04-01 21:16:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
精练隽永的好诗！！多写些拿来欣赏。问好诗人！！
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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 09:24:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
多谢以上各位的鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 17:18:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
一首很有新意的老诗歌. 顶
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PostPosted: 2007-04-02 22:10:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢白水莅临指导。
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