笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-07 19:53:59 Post subject: 七律-唐诗扩写 |
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文/笑聊 (碧山吟社)一月作业
古韵探研声调中,常常轻读觉无空。
手边云起何时雨?笔下波生不待风!(唐-神颖)
伏案心头鹰展翅,扬眉神气兔顽童。
集成一律诗言志,舒缓全身一老翁。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-07 23:46:02 Post subject: |
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“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-01-08 07:08:04 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习! |
欣赏! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-09 08:05:43 Post subject: |
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欣赏! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-12 08:47:01 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习! |
黄老师好!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-12 08:48:15 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
黄洋界 wrote: |
“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习! |
欣赏! |
庆宏兄好!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-12 08:49:03 Post subject: |
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问好莹雪妹!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-13 11:09:40 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
问好莹雪妹!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。 |
贵诗社雅兴令人神往! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-01-14 08:30:35 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
笑聊 wrote: |
问好莹雪妹!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。 |
贵诗社雅兴令人神往! |
诗社时有活动。谢谢莹雪关心。 |
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