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一根羽毛
子在川上曰
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 12:31:56    Post subject: 一根羽毛 Reply with quote

文/深圳,子在川上曰

   《停留在空中的那一秒》

那一秒钟,他在空中
不知道怎么突然就脱落了
弧线坠落。大脑一片空白
没来得及害怕,想象疼痛
或者伤口,他就坐在了地上



   《他的爱情》

那个时候,我们不懂爱情。
他叹息道。现在,懂了,
我们都在风中,急速滑落,
握不到你的手。



   《那些过程都是一些白纸》

他从高处一跃而下,我们看不到。
他在那张纸上,移动了几微米,没有人去留意。
也很少会有人想象那几微米,惊心动魄的过程。
更多的人抖动了一下那张纸,空白,还是空白。



    《一根羽毛》

那根羽毛很想停留在空中,
那是飞翔,速度,风光,高处。
那根羽毛很想时间停住,空中写满
他史诗般浩大的过程,英雄的疼痛。
(唉,就算时间停住了,投射在
我们脸上的也是阴影,只是阴影。)
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金金
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 12:44:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

末首不错
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PostPosted: 2012-11-20 13:30:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2012-11-21 11:08:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

有张力,给人以想像的留白空间
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PostPosted: 2012-11-23 07:04:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

簡單,卻有深度的詩。
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