SLIU 秀才
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發錶於: 2013-01-01 10:03:34 發錶主題: Leaves and Buds |
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Leaves and buds 111207 130102
Shivering
and flapping wildly
in the piercing wind
the brown leaves
ragged and torn
hold fast
onto the half-stripped branches
to nurture
with the very last breath
the birth of the tiny buds --
so delicate
yet composed
whose fragrance
consoles
even the worst frostbitten souls |
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summer 童生
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laoshi, 我来学习 |
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hepingdao Site Admin
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pretty poem _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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Lake 举人
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delicate.
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hold fast on
to the half-stripped branches |
would like to see "on to" on the same line. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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SLIU 秀才
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Thank you guys.
Lake, I changed it. Thanks! |
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