SLIU
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 fābiǎoyú: 2013-01-01 10:03:34 fābiǎozhùtí: Leaves and Buds |
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Leaves and buds 111207 130102
Shivering
and flapping wildly
in the piercing wind
the brown leaves
ragged and torn
hold fast
onto the half-stripped branches
to nurture
with the very last breath
the birth of the tiny buds --
so delicate
yet composed
whose fragrance
consoles
even the worst frostbitten souls |
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summer
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| fābiǎoyú: 2013-01-04 12:06:02 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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| laoshi, 我来学习 |
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hepingdao
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| fābiǎoyú: 2013-02-28 12:03:36 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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pretty poem
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Lake
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| fābiǎoyú: 2013-03-02 00:34:52 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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delicate.
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hold fast on
to the half-stripped branches |
would like to see "on to" on the same line.
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SLIU
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| fābiǎoyú: 2013-03-02 08:36:40 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Thank you guys.
Lake, I changed it. Thanks! |
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