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冷雨
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Posted: 2012-10-16 11:45:12 Post subject: 柴书院

春来花开满院红，静立柴门问老翁：昔日儒家书满院，今时为何满院空？

青洋
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Posted: 2012-10-21 05:36:58 Post subject:

問得好！ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

冷雨
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Posted: 2012-11-06 09:38:05 Post subject:

问好！

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-06 12:24:59 Post subject:

答等雨

冷雨
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Posted: 2012-11-06 14:17:43 Post subject:

问好白水！怎样才能写好格律诗呢？

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-08 04:45:17 Post subject:

雨好，写诗于我，就是玩儿。你的古典诗歌很棒的，我要向你学呢。

冷雨
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Posted: 2012-11-08 10:18:54 Post subject:

问好水！古典诗歌很棒，我吊死在你家门口！

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-11-08 13:28:20 Post subject:

惊看冷雨吊门前,一滴一滴泪满帘安得泣声动千里,疑是绛珠落九天 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

冷雨
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Posted: 2012-11-08 22:08:08 Post subject:

问好前辈！冷雨不会令您失望的，只是心里障碍还没完全恢复。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-11-09 01:05:16 Post subject:

文字游戏耳,别见怪 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-09 03:13:54 Post subject:

my god, 你们两位可是棋逢对手，将遇良才，笑晕看来古韵是好玩，顺手搬几棵树来，蜘蛛们都往这儿吊 http://yizitong.net/china/wisdom.php?o= http://yizitong.net/cpoetry/index.php 周末愉快

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-11-09 04:54:07 Post subject:

疑是晶珠落九天，篇篇诗作赛婵娟。自谦原欲砖求玉，吓坏白兄无复言。

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-09 06:51:35 Post subject:

谁说我无复言了你是说我没玩接龙？好吧，勉强试试。你们的水平都太高，而且给我留的龙尾巴也太难，真吓到我了吓坏白兄无复言，小窗瞠目看神仙庆宏冷雨喝瓶倒，李杜掷杯叹无颜

白云闲人
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Posted: 2012-11-09 11:24:13 Post subject:

也来趁趁热闹，接和白水一首：李杜掷杯叹无顔，惊呼此际遇神仙。接龙筆墨翩跹舞，佳作一篇接一篇。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-10 07:11:24 Post subject:

雨呢？

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-11-10 09:26:13 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

雨呢？

云已来，雨未下；无雨下，水断流。。。

冷雨
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Posted: 2012-11-10 20:18:16 Post subject:

问好各位老师！问好水！冷雨戏和一首：青郎投石柴篱间，窗前伊影顿失颜。奈何亭台醉翁醒，怒声厉斥挥竹板。

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-10 22:20:49 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好各位老师！问好水！冷雨戏和一首：青郎投石柴篱间，窗前伊影顿失颜。奈何亭台醉翁醒，怒声厉斥挥竹板。

哈，雨，你这是批评我们的回和似快板书呢 Laughing

五分钟临屏一乐你就别要求太高了。再来段快板书：
检根麻线系竹板，击节而乐留诗篇
古韵新音贵为和，老友新朋笑开颜
Razz

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-10 22:24:19 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

雨呢？

云已来，雨未下；无雨下，水断流。。。

大斑竹，该你的了，来段七绝吧，No More快板书 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2012-11-10 22:38:43 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

也来趁趁热闹，接和白水一首：
李杜掷杯叹无顔，
惊呼此际遇神仙。
接龙筆墨翩跹舞，
佳作一篇接一篇。
...

白云老师好和，古韵还得您多指点才是。问好周末

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