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鹧鸪天-清凉夏夜之七夕

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Posted: 2012-08-21 17:16:43 Post subject: 鹧鸪天-清凉夏夜之七夕

文/笑聊错把红尘入婉词，晚风跌落碧荷池。星河仰望牛郎座，杨柳摇窗织女诗。心曲唱，笛声吹。平安夏夜舞龙姿。谁家阿妹抛媚眼，博得芳仪邀月知。

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Posted: 2012-08-21 22:55:30 Post subject:

烂漫的婉词,美妙问好笑聊兄 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-08-22 06:00:13 Post subject:

问好岛主！谢谢岛主评赏鼓励。

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Posted: 2012-08-23 09:58:39 Post subject:

诗人聊夏月，七夕起相思。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2012-08-23 10:41:56 Post subject:

一首七夕词，很是生动传神。眉眼---是否媚眼键误？

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Posted: 2012-08-23 21:03:09 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

诗人聊夏夜，七夕起相思。

问好黄老师！

这是个传统节日，它使人想起许多许多、、、

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Posted: 2012-08-23 21:04:57 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

一首七夕词，很是生动传神。

眉眼---是否媚眼键误？

问好庆宏兄！谢谢赏评鼓励！

确是键误，谢谢指正。

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Posted: 2012-08-25 22:23:51 Post subject:

哈，七夕那天我们在露营地看星星，特亮。问好笑聊

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Posted: 2012-08-26 19:50:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈，七夕那天我们在露营地看星星，特亮。
问好笑聊

问好白水！你们这叫真浪漫！
我们是张开想象的翅膀，闭门造车哦。

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Posted: 2012-08-27 02:31:51 Post subject:

妙趣横生！天上，地下；凡间，仙境，情牵一线。好不快哉！

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Posted: 2012-08-27 07:21:13 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

妙趣横生！天上，地下；凡间，仙境，情牵一线。好不快哉！

问好冰清老师！

谢谢老师点评鼓励！

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Posted: 2012-08-28 16:41:37 Post subject:

思绪万千，，欣赏

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Posted: 2012-08-29 20:56:34 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

思绪万千，，欣赏

谢谢江南赏评！问好！

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