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詩裏的你
青洋
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PostPosted: 2012-09-27 23:59:45    Post subject: 詩裏的你 Reply with quote

诗里的你


我把你写进了诗
连同木讷的镜框
不知所措的手指和
悬在嘴角
不知寄往何处的嘲弄
甚至连旧衬衣
旧衬衣上去年的唇膏印
当然还有香烟
比我更适合你的香烟

你在诗里行走
方格,又是方格,还是方格
走过来是七步
走过去是七步
蘸着牛奶,在面包上写天书
烤炉上
烘焦的甲骨文
流出春秋冷冷的笑
和南北朝一句声嘶力竭的
雁鸣
悬梁未遂的七言
倒立 在二十一世纪
八股的聒噪和政治阴险的缄默
勾结在月白风清之夜
从反面读你
自跋到序

你在诗里
手枕着头
看山,看水,看窗台上一盆积雪
看我眼角、额头不断延伸的
航线

床是方舟
吻是海水
浮浮沉沉是梦呓

听说蓬莱桃花渡口
有一只渡船
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2012-09-28 06:17:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2012-09-28 06:45:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝少君進士的帖!不知唱歌何意,勞煩明示。
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PostPosted: 2012-09-28 12:22:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

行云流水的诗意,好
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PostPosted: 2012-09-29 01:52:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝島主點評!
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