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七律和''丁亥春思''
黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 08:19:00    Post subject: 七律和''丁亥春思'' Reply with quote
七律 和''丁亥春思''第一章
读听云先生''丁亥春思''诗,感触良多,获益良多,
敬和七律一首,请先生不吝指正.
半入云霄 望景楼, 离人不见几春秋.
倚枕圆梦青云上, 闻鸟惊心老泪流.
旭水微澜难以喜, 荣山少树亦堪忧
自来自去闲庭燕, 海阔天高羡白鸥..
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暗香如沁
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Joined: 14 Jan 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 17:54:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
果然是感触多多。欣赏。好诗/
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 18:59:26    Post subject: 致暗香入沁 Reply with quote
忱谢暗香赐评鼓励.
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 00:05:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
拜读！
几经烘托、勾勒，
诗人的主观情绪、内心世界已表现得很强烈、感人。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 04:33:55    Post subject: 谢冰请 Reply with quote
谢谢冰请点评,过誉了.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 06:51:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
倚枕圆梦青云上, 闻鸟惊心老泪流.
旭水微澜难以喜, 荣山少树亦堪忧

多謝黄洋界詞長好詩相和！
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