lin918lin
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 Posted: 2012-04-26 00:41:32 Post subject: 诗: 奶奶不老 文/林琳 |
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奶奶不老，
满脸的皱纹如盛开的
黄菊花；
头上的银发似
瀑布悬挂；
镶嵌在皮肤上的寿斑像
颗颗宝石；
风景这边独好！
奶奶不老，
搀我迈步，
教我识字。
告诉我如何礼貌，
示范我爱护幼小。
猫狗看见我撒娇，
鸟儿看见我鸣叫。
奶奶不老，
是我的良师益友，
更是我的骄傲。
我敬爱您并祝福您，
奶奶不老！
《2012。4。26写于多伦多。》 |
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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| Posted: 2012-04-26 01:04:51 Post subject: |
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风景这边独好
佳句
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美） |
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hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
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| Posted: 2012-04-26 01:12:44 Post subject: |
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积极向上
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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lin918lin
童生
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Posts: 89
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| Posted: 2012-04-26 05:55:39 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢博弈与和平岛两位诗友的浏览和点评！林琳 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2012-04-26 08:21:50 Post subject: |
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| 良好心态奠定愉快人生 |
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lin918lin
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| Posted: 2012-04-26 09:58:29 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢白水点评。祝安好！林琳 |
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