影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-10 02:45:58 Post subject: 七律•春风细语 |
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七律•春风细语
即报棋亭细语深,春风何处弄瑶琴。
栏前柳影惜怀抱,河畔梅香环袖襟。
识月独行随我爱,回诗偶暖寄知音。
夜阑岂是鸿声远,洗尽尘缘一页心。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-10 09:24:39 Post subject: |
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‘春风细语’,‘暖寄知音’,欣赏好律。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-11 14:49:17 Post subject: |
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栏前柳影、河畔梅香、春风瑶琴 ... 画意诗情! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-12 01:37:43 Post subject: |
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和上一首--借鉴(新韵)
春风何处弄瑶琴?凛冽寒梅报友心!
瘦柳随风偏起舞,高山流水遇知音。
吟哦月下诗前酒,唱和文旁笔后麟。
无意学君凭妙律,但得落地有痴新。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-12 15:03:21 Post subject: |
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高山流水遇知音,唱和声声润甘霖! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-12 17:42:50 Post subject: |
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唱和堪称佳妙,欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2012-03-12 17:55:40 Post subject: |
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春风细语,知音情深。 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2012-03-15 06:16:15 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
和上一首--借鉴(新韵)
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谢谢笑兄和师友们 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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