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《复操弦》（组诗）

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2012-03-01 12:14:40 Post subject: 《复操弦》（组诗）

《复操弦》（组诗）文／晴宝儿《十面埋伏》我放弃开口从有人说“雪花了，就有我们作案的痕迹” 隐遁一冬的天大哭。雪花仿佛从旧时光的漏斗掉下来包围不止的欢爱还有多少事物赶在来路考验我的伪装。春天已来我日夜假寐。春天了我才知道，琴音早响他一直哭着陪我生活远比戏剧更戏剧。有人清醒有人慕归。《孤单》今晚月牙，特别尖，像剪刀剪出的。我没找到剪刀。也没发现拿剪刀的人。《尖月牙》抬头看见尖月牙。一佛符贴在夜空额头。让孤零零的天多了点生气只多星点法师不见。明月高悬，夜静如墨。我想找人。随便一条黑影。方圆没人，世界当真凄凉空余月光。《咬人的月光》只剩月光。铺满黑魆魆的水泥地、车棚后墙根。月光不如水也不似水银。书里没错纠结的是朝代月亮跌落群楼缝隙身不在春江，扁舟大好山河苦等赏月人。长风收回我彼时“明月出天山” 今时“苍茫云海间” 《复操弦》月色凹凸。山河的藤蔓隐现楼缝。斜过花圃，沿着消防梯爬上窗口。月牙像一把拨子，清脆入怀万里夜色奏响失传的曲谱复操弦，千里马破长空，蓄势已发。置琴于夜，夜静是轰鸣置琴于市，繁华也流水，流水中印着一波月天青月色我守株待兔，被月劫持。 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2012-03-01 14:29:55 Post subject:

又见宝儿，高兴喜欢这样的句子：有人说“雪花了，就有我们作案的痕迹” 隐遁一冬的天大哭。生动感人

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Posted: 2012-03-01 22:07:56 Post subject:

《咬人的月光》只剩月光。铺满黑魆魆的水泥地、车棚后墙根。月光不如水也不似水银。书里没错纠结的是朝代月亮跌落群楼缝隙身不在春江，扁舟大好山河苦等赏月人。长风收回我彼时“明月出天山” 今时“苍茫云海间” _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2012-03-02 07:43:49 Post subject:

好. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2012-03-05 11:01:30 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

又见宝儿，高兴

喜欢这样的句子：

有人说“雪花了，就有我们作案的痕迹”
隐遁一冬的天
大哭。

生动感人

亲，念，夜，安。
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Posted: 2012-03-05 11:04:26 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

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《咬人的月光》

只剩月光。铺满黑魆魆的水泥地、车棚
后墙根。月光不如水
也不似水银。书里没错纠结的是朝代
月亮跌落群楼缝隙

身不在春江，扁舟
大好山河苦等赏月人。长风收回我
彼时“明月出天山”
今时“苍茫云海间”

...

山城兄的图有清脆的声音。
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Posted: 2012-03-05 11:06:08 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

好.

；）
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东北诗弦
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Posted: 2012-03-06 04:52:52 Post subject:

生活远比戏剧更戏剧。有人清醒有人慕归。 _________________ 但觉高歌有鬼神，焉知饿死填沟壑？

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