影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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 Posted: 2012-02-18 02:51:43 Post subject: 七律•夜记（新韵） |
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七律•夜记（新韵）
红尘虏获道德轻，寥落长街独立行。
酒绿灯红殊作态，树秃雪冷岂知情。
一轮缺月失河梦，数点残星呼水声。
最叹人间知命客，夜深务静写分明。
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2012-02-26 13:49:10 Post subject: |
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| 好文笔， 欣赏 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2012-02-26 14:53:18 Post subject: |
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夜深务静写分明...结得蕴味悠長！
問好影沉寒水！
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2012-02-26 19:38:04 Post subject: |
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最叹人间知命客，夜深务静写分明。
欣赏联句。 |
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