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沁園春 春望,次韻雷雨詞長
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 23:12:06    Post subject: 沁園春 春望,次韻雷雨詞長 Reply with quote

沁園春 春望,次韻雷雨詞長

歲換殊方,積雪漸融,來復一陽。
正汛水流凘,斗牛東指;春風吹暖,塞雁迴翔。
嬌杏初花,夭桃乍蕊,楊栁蕭疏展嫩黃。
追疇昔,念謝家幽夢,青草池塘。

解衣海曲彷徉,望千叠山蒼映水光。
更舒展躬身,扶筇險徑;淨澄心慮,隱几虛堂。
彈指頃時,神遊三界,河漢星雲去不妨。
須歸去,要醉呼明月,舉白飛觴。

原玉:
雷雨
沁园春.春望

惬意梁园,远望登高,万里艳阳。
看南湖春满,因风皱面,鹂鸣嫩柳,紫燕翻翔。
浪滚青风,芳郊锦绣,梨淡桃浓菜花黄。
凝情处,有小河流水,鱼跃龙塘。

思携佳客徜徉,莫辜负如此好景光。
忆金风沐浴,窗炯晚照,兰汀芷径,人在天堂。
正是花时,良辰美景,一日三游亦不妨。
归从速,共东风畅饮,一醉千觞。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 23:58:57    Post subject: Re: 沁園春 春望,次韻雷雨詞長 Reply with quote

聽雲館主 wrote:
...春風吹暖,塞雁南翔。
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春天應該是歸雁北翔才對吧。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-30 03:44:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝戴玨詞長提醒,應改為「塞雁迴翔」。
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