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舞曼西楼
童生

Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 6
Location: 美国
舞曼西楼Collection

Posted: 2007-03-28 21:03:10 Post subject: 网

网我恢恢的世界一眼望去还是满目瘢疮十指梳理流逝的风季在岁月的发端穿梭来往用一生打捞留下星星闪光的鳞片却丢失了大海的呼吸即使我跪下虔诚的膝盖却留不住欲飞的翅膀每一个完美的结都是十字路口上路，走向下一个死结不再用痉挛的双手拆解当风季到来鱼群已在他乡落网灯塔标着最后的防线潮水已走出夕阳我圆睁的目，正渐渐合起从第一个网眼我就进入你心海潜藏

司马策风
举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
司马策风Collection

Posted: 2007-03-29 00:54:01 Post subject:

音韵和谐，语言优美。形象群和意象群良好交融，提供了多重意韵，多重联想。成熟的好作品。可当精华。司马握手问好来自美国的朋友 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-03-29 16:31:39 Post subject:

每一个完美的结都是十字路口上路，走向下一个死结不再用痉挛的双手拆解当风季到来鱼群已在他乡落网好诗,欣赏~

司马策风
举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
司马策风Collection

Posted: 2007-03-30 00:39:55 Post subject:

再读，仍觉可当精华。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

三色堇
秀才

Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Posts: 148
Location: 西安
三色堇Collection

Posted: 2007-03-30 04:58:34 Post subject:

如此优美的诗歌,欣赏读.

沙漠
秀才

Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
沙漠Collection

Posted: 2007-03-30 05:08:09 Post subject:

内在气息很好，开合适度，欣赏！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-03-30 06:54:12 Post subject:

优美的, 成熟的.

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