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七律•过年散记
影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2012-01-27 01:15:27    Post subject: 七律•过年散记 Reply with quote
七律•过年散记
水凝沧浪蒹葭老，人在红尘历忘川。
转眼烟花龙虎踞，会心亲友感情牵。
家中饭酒多三味，案上诗词少一联。
踏雪寻梅追兔去，风山留印补全篇。
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PostPosted: 2012-01-27 16:30:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
家中饭酒多三味，案上诗词少一联。
踏雪寻梅追兔去，风山留印补全篇。


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PostPosted: 2012-01-27 17:03:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
家有三味，案上诗词，会心亲友，踏雪寻梅
寒水君如此惬意过年，令人羡慕。
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PostPosted: 2012-01-27 19:25:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
家中饭酒哪三味，案上诗词少何联？

还望寒水兄提点。谢谢！
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PostPosted: 2012-02-01 04:22:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
家中饭酒哪三味，案上诗词少何联？

还望寒水兄提点。谢谢！


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