lin918lin
童生
Joined: 21 Nov 2011
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 Posted: 2012-01-14 08:26:16 Post subject: 诗: 你好 -------致加拿大多伦多冬季晨曦 文／林琳 |
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太阳，你早！/北风，你好。/小松鼠，你好。/小麻雀，你好。/白信鸽，你好。/宠物狗，你好。/汽车，你好。/房屋，你好。/大树，你好。/拳友们，你好！/莫惧冷，莫怕寒！/功夫扇，举得高高。/太极拳，打得叫好！/莫焦燥，莫烦恼；/健康平安，祝福朝朝。/为每一天注入欢笑！
2011。12。11。晨写于加拿大多伦多 |
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chenrunmin
进士出身
Joined: 21 Nov 2009
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Location: nanjing.jiangsu.china.
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| Posted: 2012-01-19 05:49:43 Post subject: |
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欣赏。问好。新年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
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Location: SFO
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| Posted: 2012-01-19 08:15:39 Post subject: |
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這是聊天詩?
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美） |
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lin918lin
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| Posted: 2012-01-19 13:31:59 Post subject: |
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| 这是首白话压韵诗，由感而发，一气呵成。谢谢博弈和chcnrunmin两位诗友，祝新年快乐！林琳 |
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